Not bad,
but it got pretty annoying at some parts, and made me impatient, like the long silences and whatnot. try to get a better microphone, and don't do the static stuff. it causes ear rapes, especially because the soft talking causes turning up your volume. then, the static = ear rape.
Sorry about the pauses. When I was making this, my brother kept yelling at me about the long pauses, and I said "oh, no one will notice." XD. I will try to get a better mic, also.
-The Animator
LOLZ!
Great Movie!
But make it a bit longer next time. That did look too easy like what it said at the end. make some1 notice the assissin an turn on an alarm then he has to beat the$h*t out of all the workers. OH! One more thing. Make the assissin get hurt just a bit. like a black eye or a bloody nose.
If I make another one I make it Longer, The Rest of what you said sounds possible apart from the thing about black eye and bloody nose. the assassin thing hasn't even got a face :). thanks for the review
Ayy lmao, name is Josh, I'm 20 and I like playing music. Went to school for audio production and still learning. If you're here, you should PM me and talk about anything. I'm open to any conversation. :)
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